The below is an exercise in literary debate occassioned by the wolfies poor poetry...:-(
the debate had earlier episodes too...unfortunately my scraps were resolutely put sous-rature...either due to some derridan belief...or ( more likely...lol )...they were too unworthy to be coldstoraged...anyways...
i trust the reader to make inferences of my elegant views when they were cruelly tabularasaed....(am purposefully using hard words...isnt this an erudite sabha? )
مرذا: use the punctuation, would add so much meaning and value!!
مرذا: it has nothing to do with the meter or technicality of writing poem. The fluidity you are mentioning is about the though process.
مرذا: try english
مرذا: k any news abt the girl?
[an aside...which shows that even literary critics have hearts...lol]
مرذا: all round and round,round and round twisting my feet;and writhing my wreath.Into the air I shall rise and fly ,and into the stars n the clouds I soar . See how Punctuations and stress change meanings. Just a suggestion, if you like it accept it, if not. there is the bin!!
مرذا: the writer is never bothered because an individual sees his perspective and thing by what he goes through, that doe snot mean the writer in in liberty to miss on proper stress. Try to walk before you can run. You are trying to be eilot and dicknson , fine no problem, but you have to travel through smaller steps to reach there
scio amo: a. i never claimed to b a writer
b. if i am, i am what i write..or i write what i like...what expresses me
c. for me writing is catharsis...it is neither eliotian nor dicknsonian...possibly both,,,lol...but simply a liturgy
d.a s u might well be aware in liturgy one feels the spaces one need not always be expressly told where they are
e.i am running...lol...en fait, i think i am far better than anything u can compare me too
f.the above was an exercise in truth
g.the below is an effort in modesty...lol
h.ofcours ur suggestions r most gracious...i am sure in future in my little endeavours i shall try to arouse u better...lol
the debate had earlier episodes too...unfortunately my scraps were resolutely put sous-rature...either due to some derridan belief...or ( more likely...lol )...they were too unworthy to be coldstoraged...anyways...
i trust the reader to make inferences of my elegant views when they were cruelly tabularasaed....(am purposefully using hard words...isnt this an erudite sabha? )
مرذا: use the punctuation, would add so much meaning and value!!
مرذا: it has nothing to do with the meter or technicality of writing poem. The fluidity you are mentioning is about the though process.
مرذا: try english
مرذا: k any news abt the girl?
[an aside...which shows that even literary critics have hearts...lol]
مرذا: all round and round,round and round twisting my feet;and writhing my wreath.Into the air I shall rise and fly ,and into the stars n the clouds I soar . See how Punctuations and stress change meanings. Just a suggestion, if you like it accept it, if not. there is the bin!!
مرذا: the writer is never bothered because an individual sees his perspective and thing by what he goes through, that doe snot mean the writer in in liberty to miss on proper stress. Try to walk before you can run. You are trying to be eilot and dicknson , fine no problem, but you have to travel through smaller steps to reach there
scio amo: a. i never claimed to b a writer
b. if i am, i am what i write..or i write what i like...what expresses me
c. for me writing is catharsis...it is neither eliotian nor dicknsonian...possibly both,,,lol...but simply a liturgy
d.a s u might well be aware in liturgy one feels the spaces one need not always be expressly told where they are
e.i am running...lol...en fait, i think i am far better than anything u can compare me too
f.the above was an exercise in truth
g.the below is an effort in modesty...lol
h.ofcours ur suggestions r most gracious...i am sure in future in my little endeavours i shall try to arouse u better...lol
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